By: Neil Hayes

Neil Hayes — Mon, 11 Sep 2023 12:29:56 +0000

I love your ending better 💟

By: lacey forrest

lacey forrest — Fri, 23 Sep 2022 04:45:40 +0000

i know you have already heard this opinion before, but i was hoping for the father Jack to turn the boy into his own crossdressing sex slave using the boys humiliation as leverage to get him to do whatever and whoever Jack says to do. I was hoping for possibly over the summer vacation that the boy would be staying over at their place more and more and Jack would build a secret basement dungeon with hidden entranceway completely soundproof to put the boy on a shelf and torture him in every perverted sexy possible way. Forcing him to act as Carol but a slutty dirty version that Jack always wanted, and the boy would be on call while locked in the dungeon and be constantly in perfect makeup and wig and wear whatever he was told to wear to satisfy his perverted jailer. Jack would slowly stretch his virgin hole to a point that he could take on most big hung men, as Jack would be the biggest most well hung of all. Jack would be absolutely sadistic as well as super perverted and thrives off of the sexual torture, humiliation and just straight up pain that he dishes out to his new toy, Carol two. Id love to read about how he restrains Him very securely so he cannot move at all then brands him on his ass cheek, the boy screaming in agony as Jack laughs and spanks his ass unmercifully! Jack then would apply some burn ointment onto the new brand and as he rubs it in, his insatiable lust kicks in and he rubs some ointment onto and up into the boys rectum, first a finger, then two , as the boy is screaming and crying, unable to move a muscle, weeping loudly from the pain but equally from the pure humiliation of being branded like livestock and being a sex slave to this sick pervert giving in to his most sickest desires and being filmed at every moment. The horror of being forced so suck Jacks enormous cock as well as swallow his disgusting sperm whenever Jack wasnt shooting his giant cumloads up his ass right up into the boys guts and forcing the boy to BEG JACK to be allowed to suck his cock. to tell Jack that he “loves him so much” and is so glad that Jack captured him and is planning on keeping him for the rest of his LIFE ! This thought of endless pain and torture, humiliation and constant unwanted FORCED gay bondage sex with Jack and Jacks friends as well as the random dobermans and german sheppards occasionally is what keeps Carol two ( the boy) awake and openly loudly weeping at night. He yells out to Jack and begs for his release, and promises Jack anything and everything to be free again, and Jack has cameras and microphones all over the dungeon recording everything always. Jack would sometimes elude to the possibility of releasing the boy in the very near future but then yanking the rug out from under him so to speak at the very last second to destroy the boy mentally and drive him to the brink of suicide, which will not be allowed. Way too easy to go out like that! Id like to read about the boy having all his body hair removed permanently using some sort of painful home brewed electrolysis machine, about Jack restricting the boys caloric intake to a tenth of what is considered normal to keep him thin and petite, too weak to resist, and so hungry that Jacks cum is a welcome snack that is gobbled up quickly. Fuck now IM getting a hard on! If you dont write the rest of the story would you allow ME to pick it up and run with it using these ideas? You might enjoy it too! Last thing- just when the boy thought it could not get much worse than it already is, Jack abducts another youth of similar age as Carole two and for a month he never sees the other captive but hears him screaming as he is raped, trained, branded, forced to eat cum, starved, pissed on, fucked by dogs and tormented with the reality of living the rest of his long life in constant pain, torture humiliation, forced gay sex, forced beastiality, and just plain old torture just for the sake of torture. After a reasonable period of training the new slave, and after he has been feminized with hair removal as well as his anus stretched out to accommodate huge cocks and throat fucked until he no longer gags and vomits while he is throat fucked, the two boys finally meet. This can get very interesting now, both boys come from a strong catholic upbringing with tons of guilt, are very hederosexual and hate the thought of homosexual sex as it is repulsive to them both will be tied together into a forced 69 cock sucking session and whoever cums first will be tortured in a SPECIAL EXTRA AWFUL WAY so each boy will be motivated to suck the others cock to get him to cum before he himself cums, and as an added bonus, during this session Jack will be there with random anal stimulating toys inserting them into the boys pussies (assholes) and seeing their reactions. Forcing both boys to make out with each other, tongues darting in and out of each others mouths as they cry, mascara getting smeared, lipstick all over each others mouths and faces, being locked up in chastity cages with no possibility of cumming anytime soon, being fed viagras ground up in their tiny portions of food and force fed estrogen and have their pecs pumped by a milking machine to stretch out the skin to accept breast implants!! oh hell yes!

By: Julia

Julia — Tue, 19 Jul 2022 13:46:53 +0000

sweet story, but like the others obviously I was looking for the “other” ending, with Jack keeping you as a 2nd Carole for himself whenever he wanted (and that that also was the reason why he paid you much better than agreed). The given ending is probably more realistic, but as this is a fantasy only anyway…

By: DorathyJayne

DorathyJayne — Sun, 28 Mar 2021 23:31:06 +0000

Yes i was looking for to that big ending,,where Jack makes love to you,,after all the effort to look so pretty and sexy as a woman,,,his woman,,,the woman who would put a smile on his face and keep it there,,”No” matter what it takes…oh yes better ending

By: Jaye Dee Miller

Jaye Dee Miller — Mon, 18 Jan 2021 12:06:51 +0000

Its to bad the story ended the way it did. I think a better ending would have been that Jack took you into his arms and started kissing you. At this point you could have dropped to your knees and unzipped his pants and reached in and took his hardening manhood out and kissed it. A man can’t resist a blowjob and from a pretty “woman” it can’t get any better. After he shot his load into your mouth and down your throat he probably would have taken you up to the bedroom and made love to you. There is no sensation quite like having a hard cock in your ass.

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